tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post4349741851016481141..comments2023-03-22T14:48:56.834-07:00Comments on After: The End, The End, The End... For Now At LeastKitt Mosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10876024712113994247noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-22951621880819183552015-06-25T20:42:52.550-07:002015-06-25T20:42:52.550-07:00Killthe worm with goat or pig straps with ied...Killthe worm with goat or pig straps with ied...KinGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11733292716144461585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-37780779167495710622012-05-15T13:53:08.716-07:002012-05-15T13:53:08.716-07:00Wow this is so awsome, i had problems putting it d...Wow this is so awsome, i had problems putting it down ever since i started reading. You should defently make more post-apocalyptic stories.hotmailcompany52noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-59657336661926015242011-07-22T08:32:41.356-07:002011-07-22T08:32:41.356-07:00@Joe - just checked out that rec. Interesting star...@Joe - just checked out that rec. Interesting start. Thanks for the heads up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-16647862214340491402011-07-15T11:18:30.594-07:002011-07-15T11:18:30.594-07:00Incidentally, I just got caught up on another grea...Incidentally, I just got caught up on another great Story that sort of starts where this one leaves off. It's a Zombie based apocalypse, but it's all about surviving and rebuilding after things go into the dumper.<br />I highly recommend Adrian's Undead Diary:<br />http://adriansundeaddiary.com/Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12340136021625342062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-29468036183237104692011-07-06T12:02:50.636-07:002011-07-06T12:02:50.636-07:00Like Joe said, great story but it doesn't feel...Like Joe said, great story but it doesn't feel finished. Overall though you did a great job Kitt.I know how hard it can be to write a story. Thanks for you hard work and great tale.leroy mileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912724128767721083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-91008883148835677902011-06-21T14:32:38.379-07:002011-06-21T14:32:38.379-07:00I want more!
Great story, but it doesn't fee...I want more! <br /><br />Great story, but it doesn't feel finished. What happens next? What is life like on the island? What happens with the creatures? <br />Perhaps that isn't the story you set out to tell, but inquiring minds want more :)Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12340136021625342062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-66107227682793379632011-06-16T09:20:58.727-07:002011-06-16T09:20:58.727-07:00Oh and sorry for the double post, but if you do ge...Oh and sorry for the double post, but if you do get it edited and get it into a print version can you drop me a line? This feels like something I would love to have on my bookshelf.Melissahttp://lightsout.nerdettesadventures.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-45418730542835330472011-06-16T09:15:40.870-07:002011-06-16T09:15:40.870-07:00I found this story yesterday and like Kathy, read ...I found this story yesterday and like Kathy, read it in two settings. I love apocalyptic fiction. This was awesome. Very well written, great cliffhanger installments.Melissahttp://www.lightsout.nerdettesadventures.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-38059064486417261402011-06-14T14:27:25.638-07:002011-06-14T14:27:25.638-07:00I found this story this morning and finished it in...I found this story this morning and finished it in just two sittings. You are the only on-line, post apocalyptic writer who understands character development, plot line and setting. The pace was good. There was plenty of drama but moments of beauty to keep it from being too dark. Very well done.kathyhttp://www.justincasebook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-33646871658896716812011-06-14T07:20:13.335-07:002011-06-14T07:20:13.335-07:00I'm sorry to see it end here - I thought the n...I'm sorry to see it end here - I thought the next phase could have been David going back out to the mainland to encourage others to come to Holme, much like Sven did for him and Lisa.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-473492254809526563.post-9213940376749692942011-06-12T06:21:02.396-07:002011-06-12T06:21:02.396-07:00The End! Well, this has been an awesome story. I o...The End! Well, this has been an awesome story. I only wish there had been one chapter more, in which David regaled their new friends with his alien destroying adventure, and received expressions of admiration that did wonders for his self esteem :-)<br />All the best,<br />FionaFionahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08367178990462341240noreply@blogger.com